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Just thought to post this here.... Bits and pieces of information I have learned about how to make a manga.....
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~AngelERenoir Oct 9, 2012  Student Digital Artist
I read these tutorials and I get the theory but my camera angling still kinda suck, LOL.
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=mayshing Oct 10, 2012  Professional Filmographer
hm, i took a look at your manga pages, you are better than you think on paneling, they are clear to read, even when there's alot going on. Stuff i would suggest is:
1. improve overall finish, on lineart, black and white shapes relationships
2. Use negative space between panels for emotional expression
3. Use more long shots, and shots from above or lower angle.
4. Try using more vertical composition, you have a lot of horizontal based panels, you can try something more vertical looking.

That's about it. You are on the right track.
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~AngelERenoir Oct 10, 2012  Student Digital Artist
I feel like I'm horrible because coming up with those layout took me hours and 10+ thumbnail sketches for each page.

Oh about point 2. What do you mean negative space? Can you show me examples?
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=mayshing Oct 15, 2012  Professional Filmographer
the usage of negative space is sort of a shoujo trait, more shoujo uses it: [link]
D.N.Angel has perfect examples where negative space is used for emotions.

Naruto has a bit: [link] (top panel on this one)
The sequence where he describes Gara's pain is the best sequence on his negative space, but most of shonen's negative space are framed, while shoujo's are open.

Example of vertical composition: [link]
I personally like the open space rather than the closed one.

To close a space and give it weight, use black. To make it seem open and airy, just leave it white.
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~AngelERenoir Oct 15, 2012  Student Digital Artist
Thanks! I always feel awkward about drawing blank panels. It makes the page look empty and I feel like something is missing, LOL :D
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=mayshing Oct 15, 2012  Professional Filmographer
best wishes. :)
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~gremory09 Jun 24, 2012  Student Artist
tnx ur a big help....now i know how to make a manga.
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~extremist52 Jan 24, 2012  Student General Artist
it looks great, you help me from my headache. thanks a lot
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~konami25 Jan 6, 2012  Student Traditional Artist
thnk you
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